Interesting take on losing one's virginity and damn hot to boot! ;) I like that Cordy never stopped defying him and he remained gentle outside of that first thrust :P I liked how you kept going between each of their thoughts, I'm all about the internal dialogue! =D And of course the banter was quite witty and fitting for the show :P
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Date: 2012-12-09 05:48 pm (UTC)